剧情介绍
旭刚的儿子患病急需巨款,走投无路的他选择铤而走险,治疗得以继续。然而没过多久事情突然败露,也将他推到了风口浪尖,面对指责和儿子病危,旭刚该何去何从?
Xu Gang's son is seriously ill and needs a lot of money. He chooses a wrong way and the treatment can continue. But it also pushed him to the top of the storm, but things suddenly exposed, in the face of criticism and his son's critical illness, where should Xu Gang go? 暂无
Xu Gang's son is seriously ill and needs a lot of money. He chooses a wrong way and the treatment can continue. But it also pushed him to the top of the storm, but things suddenly exposed, in the face of criticism and his son's critical illness, where should Xu Gang go? 暂无
啧 怎么说呢 哪儿都还行 哪儿都差把劲 戏剧冲突有点没有新意
社会议题多一星,本以为只是讲患病难治的亲情,实际是反映众筹捐款的灰色产业链,导演几部短片一个共同的不足都是太依赖戏剧性冲突,又不能在剧本合理性上做到完美,太看重故事,就忽视了情感
一个太令人心碎的故事,底层人何必为难底层人。
想起了另一部短片《印第安少年》还有《我们与恶的距离》
兩層邏輯,主人公和孩子夾在中間。好的結構。但最大的痛點,是從第一幕臉的特寫就暴露出來的:臉不夠髒。所以主角那個氣質差了幾個維度。
用陈斯远来骂我的话说就是“这就完啦?”“差一股劲,那个感觉没推上去”“再想想人物真正的动作是什么。”前面铺垫的真的挺好的。
留白再少点就好了。
最核心的戏剧冲突没做踏实,有些可惜
反映众筹捐款的诈骗问题,留下开放结尾。镜头和调度比较成熟,不喜欢的点是配乐使用有些大而无当。